Thursday, September 27, 2007

First Poetic Collaboration - Villanelle

With gratitude and glee, I proudly publish the first attempt at poetic collaboration, with my lone blog stalker...er...commenter, "h." A job well done.

I don't know how this poem will end.
You stir such strange feelings in me
Not sure if I want you as a lover or friend.

I think of you, I make pretend
What kind of future could there be?
I don't know how this poem will end.

My will, once strong, begins to bend
And though I give my love to thee
Not sure if I want you as a lover or friend.

A heart, once broken, starts to mend
I smile at the possibility
I don't know how this poem will end.

And when as my "date" you attend
Some event, or show we wanted to see
Not sure if I want you as a lover or friend.

Uncertainty threatens this heart to rend
And even now, I am sorry
I don't know how this poem will end.
Not sure if I want you as a lover or friend.


-written collaboratively by fprm and 'h'

(c) 2007

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