I have the key lines for a villanelle, I just need to fill in the rest...perhaps a little cheese, mustard and beer will help out later tonight.
Here's the framework:
1. I don't know how this poem will end...
2. -----
3. Not sure if I want you as a lover or friend...
4. ---
5. ---
6. I don't know how this poem will end.
7. ---
8. ---
9. Not sure if I want you as a lover or friend.
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12. I don't know how this poem will end.
13. ---
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15. Not sure if I want you as a lover or friend.
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18. I don't know how this poem will end.
19. Not sure if I want you as a lover or friend.
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1. I don't know how this poem will end...
2. You stir such strange feelings in me
3. Not sure if I want you as a lover or friend...
4. I think of you, I make pretend
5. What kind of future could there be?
6. I don't know how this poem will end.
7. My will, once strong, begins to bend
8. And though I give my love to thee
9. Not sure if I want you as a lover or friend.
10. A heart, once broken, starts to mend
11. I smile at possibility
12. I don't know how this poem will end.
13. And when as my "date" you attend
14. Some event, or show we wanted t o see
15. Not sure if I want you as a lover or friend.
16. Uncertainty threatens this heart to rend
17. And even now, I am sorry
18. I don't know how this poem will end.
19. Not sure if I want you as a lover or friend.
Actually, I should have made 'love' in 8 something like 'heart' so that 'love' and 'lover' aren't both used.
Ah well, that's what I get for rushing through. But it made me think of newspaper contests I used to enter :-)
Kudos to H for a good job.
Our first artistic collaboration.
Any other takers?
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